the great pretender

"...first year (...) been assessed (...) congratulate you in successfully transfering (...). enclosing (...) comments (...) in planning your studies (...) coming year."

"...address comments (...) confirm expectations (...) very competent (...) story enough (...) basis for his (...) expected (...) publication (...) all (...) recommended (...)."

am i the only one spotting the flaws and the irony of this situation?